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Tears alone well

Tears do well

Tears or a tear

Raises emotions
in yes, don't fear
in any human

A PM like Churchill
the solidest man
in the ''Dark Hour''
had a tear well up

I think the word
tear does 'well'
does well...
and
it glimmers like a diamond...
reminds one of the diamond ring
in the solar eclipse
if you have seen
don't mind my ellipse....

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Tears and diamonds...
Thank you for posting your sparkling write.
It was a pleasure to read.
I liked the use of the word eclipse.
It addad a lot to the shine.

IRiz

Now
I believe in telepathy
just a second ago
I posted a comment on Raj's Sunku
In respect of friendly creative you
Irene
Dobridenh

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IRiz

shall and will
do I have to hear it
deafy me
u know it

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Hi Lovedly, what a lovedly poem. I love its playfulness with the word well, something I can appreciate very well..

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

tyro O one
and
only you spring well
in unique poetry
let tears also in gratitude
our eyes well
'twill be swell
poetry does ring the bell....

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Tears do well
from emotional depths
may shine as crystals
or die an instant death
even add to the canvas
a human touch

from where they come
when and how
even if I know
they still will jerk
in moments of
sheer overwhelment
shed in black or white
.............................................

raj (sublime_ocean)

'''''they still will jerk+++++++++++++
what a manly connotatiion
as you swell
hope soonly all be well

now sunku it raj _sublime
squeeze it
like LIME.......

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