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Teach. Teach your Parents well.

ripped into existence,
a near year coma complete
warned by vaginal resistance
we appear here without teeth.

without warm fur or claws
without agility or strength
critiqued for physical flaws
including genital length

will it – be a healthy slut?
will it – be ugly and alone?
will it – make more of us?
will it – obey what its shown?

“responsible for” is not love.
a species wide delusion.
how selfish demanding they rise above
your life’s meager prostitution.

let it – be a king of creative fools
let it – be the messiah of tradition’s plunder
let it – use it’s own power tools
let it – forget “for father and mother”

without honor or reason,
without fairness or credibility,
proud parents form legions
against a generations abilities.

jealous of lost innocence
vicarious hearts indeed.
unable to see influence
as a gorgeous mutual need.

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Just time for a quick once over. I like the rhyme pattern which allowed more freedom of expression. I usually don't like repetitive line beginnings but it actually works here. I didn't have time to deduce the vague (at least to me lol) message but enjoyed the read anyway.........stan

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