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Tavern Song

Submitted by Owl Has My Soul on Sat, 2021-11-06 10:38

Take a pause and sit down
Drink your fill but don't drown
Eat a pie or a morsel exotic
Give a burp and a fart
Save some room for a tart.
And meet her upstairs for a frolic

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just sharing tales while we drink ales
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Obadiah Grey

Sat, 2021-11-06 11:28

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I may have married her at some point,
its all a bit blurry but they say
smell is the best way to access the memory..

Thanks fer the smirk!!

Obi.

Geezer

Sat, 2021-11-06 15:02

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'Cept Geez was here! ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

Ray Whitaker

Sun, 2021-11-07 12:29

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Nicely done, even tho it’s a strictly male point of view. It works well!

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