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Tantrum
The monster speaks
my humour reeks
outward bile leaks
somewhere it peaks
downward it streaks
apologise, I'm meek
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Structured: Western
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Jenifer James
Wed, 2013-01-09 06:40
Very cute, Sueb! I know just
Very cute, Sueb! I know just what you mean. Temper gets there, words are said - and then, oh dear. like it very much. xxx
Jenifer Jaspa James
sueb
Wed, 2013-01-09 06:43
ah thanks so much Jenifer
ah thanks so much Jenifer glad u like this little one hope your well all the best Sueb x
author commentFrenchf
Wed, 2013-01-09 12:59
From a disgusted wife
My interpretation as a divorcee was-
sh.tty husband speaks
Uncalled for vile word
But to keep the peace
I pretend it was unheard
Why do I always have to compromise?
When I am sometimes right
And act out all those lies?
SO I can snuggle up in the night.
sueb
Wed, 2013-01-09 13:11
poem in reply very nice but i
poem in reply very nice but i wouldn't become a marriage counsellor lol x
author commentFrenchf
Thu, 2013-01-10 13:54
Nor would I ever be married again
Apparently marriage counselling doesnt work because they are never there when you need them.
Perhaps we need a "marriage line"
akin to "child line"
sueb
Thu, 2013-01-10 14:01
fills me with horror when u
fills me with horror when u have yr own problems don't want to take on other sat the mo very happy with my lot x
author commentIan.T
Wed, 2013-01-09 19:13
You Girls Both
Well I wont upset you in future or this type of poetry might end up on banners lol, Night Night.
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
sueb
Wed, 2013-01-09 19:24
it just might ian all the
it just might ian all the best sueb x
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