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Tabulae

Ice
Dice
roll
to
fall
upon
a
double
five
smooth
as
glass
slide
the stones
from
pointed
tongue
to
tongue
to
pass
the
bar
on the
way
home,
get
the party
safely back
and
one
by
one
into
the
winning
stack.

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Comments

Liked the format it made a change, not sure if it will catch on though.
I missed your works before but will watch out for you, Yours Ian.T

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

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