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Symptoms of testosterone, Part 3 – Immortality

Women only know for sure
Men make
make art
make empires
make monuments
or seduce
or rape

or quietly accept our own ends

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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It don't look finished to me.

cheers,
Jess
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