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SWORDS IN MY TUMMY
Still struggling
is TIME nigh\
some poet of Neo
to me the path show ...
ere!!!!
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Geezer
Tue, 2022-11-22 16:28
"What you talkin' about Willis?"...
Time for what? Can't tell you what I don't know. ~ Geez./
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Lavender
Tue, 2022-11-22 18:17
Swords In My Tummy
Hi, Lovedly,
Would love to know title meaning. I've read this a few times - and will be back to read again after you respond.
Thanks!
Lav
lovedly
Wed, 2022-11-23 00:31
Lav
rather UNWELL All say age Wait I'M An over-ripe pineapple you know what
But don't through me out yet
Thanks I'll be back soonest rgd
author commentLavender
Wed, 2022-11-23 08:32
Take good care!
I look forward to reading more of your poetry soon!
Lav
Geezer
Wed, 2022-11-23 09:06
So sorry...
to hear you are sick! Shit, you are so enigmatic, that you might have gone to the hospital, recovered and been back again before we knew what the hell is going on! Try just saying something in plain English once in a while! "I am sick and might not be around for a while is a great start." I am sure there are many of us here that will tell you "Get well soon!" Waiting to see some poemies from you! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-11-23 12:52
YES yes yes
I am a self doc
the medical splst told me
if you come
you will just go
where no one knows
I am now well attending routine
slight pain still in tummy
Swords blunted by me LOL
I have traversed worse HELL
TC
I love all who read me
you Gee especially
Iwon't go so easily!!!
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