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Sweetest Confections Confession

Deliciously sweet the
taste of heaven on my lips
is what I felt the moment we kissed.
O how I crave and how I miss
the sweet warmth
of your tenderness
of your bodies bliss
Love awakened by a kiss
It is love I seek in your eyes
reflecting the love from
deep inside.
I await anxiously
to coincide
with your every step and stride
mentally we are side by side
I am yours I have no pride
No other force can divide
the love between us
only multiplies
from my heart I cannot hide.
Honey sweet and sugar brown
in your love I could drown
The nectar
drink of love
rains down on us
from above.
Sweetest Confections Confessions
of Love
I suppose I am in love
I suppose I am in love
I suppose I am in LOve.

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