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Sweet Mercury

If I could have been there
To hold your sweet hand
Before I’d come
I’d smooth out the sand
Quiet the ocean, silence the birds
So Your last loving song
Is all that I heard

K. Mulroney

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

This poem is power packed with emotion it brought me to tears you clearly know your business

Chrys

..is open to misinterpretation...

Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

Have a problem

Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.

By: K. Mulroney

" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."

author comment

The problem is in the line.

Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

To say I will say one more time stay off my work. You continue this I will report you. Done over

Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.

By: K. Mulroney

" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."

author comment

You have my assurance I will not waste my time with you any more.
.

Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

Bye.
.

Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

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