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I'm used
to people
picking pebbles.

To aim,
Throw at me,
but I still live.

I bring to
silence critics.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 


I liked this and a poetic message of getting back at people who used you in few words. Fits the form and the intent of the form as well


raj (sublime_ocean)

I appreciate


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