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Sunku 7

Little vile
Inevitable fate
Tastes so sweet

Skull bones
Switch blade
Feels so right

Familiar taste
Venomous snake
Never again

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what you have written. I like the vehemence, the vicious vein of lines. Makes Killer want to stalk the streets again.

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Is never a good thing. But that familiar taste of poison always seems to be lurking. Perhaps killer needs to visit

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

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cheers,
Jess
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rhe subku is defined b'it threed stanzas and in exh kine,

cheers,
Jess
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