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The sun

Clouds, so soft, float across the sky
It fills me with joy, I don't know why
At the dawn, the sky is alight with fire
a sight that never fails to inspire
this poem that I wrote just for fun
for our special friend, the magnificent sun

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Firstly welcome to Neopoet, I see you are testing the waters with this one.
It is a short sweet piece, we will look out for your future writes.
Have a go at Barbara's wind Renga it is good practice in writing,
Talk to you later, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Not sure about the "it" at the beginning of line 2. Do you mean the clouds then it should be "they" as I can't see how it is related to the sky.
Anyway, I have enjoyed this lighthearted piece.
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I agree with everyone when I say the poem is short and sweet. Almost a children's poem. Is that a thought you have had before?

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