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Stars Sonnet By Shakespeare

This is a lovely sonnet

by the greatest Shakespeare
we are no parallel

but stars are only
landmarks of heaven

they give a statistical data only

who was born
when you were born
same date month year may be
also time within two hours
of each
makes a world of a difference

different
but what about

Genes
Environment
and
Circumstances

all are totally different
have you ever seen

or even thought

we test medicines
on frogs and rabbits or rats
as tough these two/three
only were our ancestors
do some research
or ask me a

Time Specialist
that I be

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

but stars are only
landmarks of heaven

What beautiful words.

A really lovely poem.

Thank you...Teddy

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