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A star with a scar

A star with
a scar
lead out of
the light.
Longs for
love yet
the night .

Last few words: 
My inspiration was sunset boulevard I’m sorry for my absence but it’s hard to think recently I’ve had two bran surgeries they had to put a bur hole up which is you drill a hole in the skull and they discovered my shunt was over draining and then I had brain surgery. It’s hard to write because it’s hard for me to think.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Glad to hearths you are coming thru your healthcare struggles!

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you back and writing. I agree, short sentences, keeping the thoughts focused, will help you come back. Nice job so far. ~ Geez.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

I love a well done concise poem. This one reminds me of my favorite Joni Mitchell song

my inspiration was
this scene from the movie sunset boulevard

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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