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A star with a scar
A star with
a scar
lead out of
the light.
Longs for
love yet
nurtures
the night .
Last few words:
My inspiration was sunset boulevard
I’m sorry for my absence but it’s hard to think recently I’ve had two bran surgeries they had to put a bur hole up which is you drill a hole in the skull and they discovered my shunt was over draining and then I had brain surgery. It’s hard to write because it’s hard for me to think.
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Region & Country
Virginia, USA
Favorite Poets
Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde, William Wordsworth
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Ray Whitaker
Mon, 2021-11-29 21:44
nice short piece.
Glad to hearths you are coming thru your healthcare struggles!
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Geezer
Tue, 2021-11-30 00:26
Nice to see...
you back and writing. I agree, short sentences, keeping the thoughts focused, will help you come back. Nice job so far. ~ Geez.
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large marge
Tue, 2021-11-30 14:54
Really nice!
I love a well done concise poem. This one reminds me of my favorite Joni Mitchell song
Edward nigma
Tue, 2021-11-30 16:47
thank you
my inspiration was
this scene from the movie sunset boulevard
https://youtu.be/jMTT0LW0M_Y
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
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