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Stainless lovers Year 2010

Stainless lovers

This poem was composed
after reading a poet's version
of self love
and
a state of idealism.

I do hope
it does justice
to the poetic love
one of idealism...

Stainless Love

I have no doubt
that you were sleeping
as those words rolled out
neither the sun had set,
nor were you dreaming.

Perhaps 'twas early morn by then,
Rise my friend
above the soiled sheets of pain,
love is the only beauty in life
that does never at all stain
even after all love has drenched
in rain

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Comments

it's so simple and says it all... love is the only beauty in life that does never at all stain, even after all love has drenched in rain. This really struck me, there's nothing else I can say. Thank you for this beauty.

 

Love,
Steph

... to remember what it felt like to have my being set alight
beneath the moon when I was full and I was dancing with the night
when I could see beyond my sight
when I could see beyond my sight

I have come across .
I am an aged person
but my mind
works at the level
of the readers
who appreciate my worth

And you really
young lady are one such a one
I have come across many
about the Internet
on sites I deliver my sermons.
God Bless you lady,
if there be one. .

amen

author comment

To me, this is one of your best poetic outpourings ever. It says so much so succinctly and with such verve.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

I was wondering why you now
don't come to read me

thank you very much
This was composed long ago
when I was yet
a novice
poet

author comment

but have little time for commenting so try to concentrate on newbies.
Definitely no slight intended.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

some new bees are intriguing
I agree
but once in a way do read
my naked tree

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