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Spring (Tanka)

a gypsy spirit 
speaking Bohemian language 
are the wild daisies 

When the season is over 
the phase is caged in a vase

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

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Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily

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I liked this Rula, especially the Bohemian touch which made this unique...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

For the encouraging words. Highly appreciate it.

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for adding me and the nice comment.
Much appreciate it dear.
Hope all is well with you.

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My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day

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coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to

not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way

And many thanks for the time and the nice words

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Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.

Alid

Khalid. I think this is my first or second one.

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excellent work!
dazzling sweet!

thank U Rula!

Have you written haiku or senyru lately

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are we supposed to write haiku and senyru or only tanka

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.

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Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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Steve. So kind of you to give this one a visit.
Appreciate it

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Welcome to eternal renga

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