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Spreading Wings

Two lovers
on distant branches
plea to the wind
blow faster enough
to make us kiss
at least
the wind smiles
and
says first read this

Spreading Wings

From that far off distant lands
Humans on my page land
they love my beauty
and
I am happy
with my fragrance spreading
far and wild
and
what a delight
everywhere around the world
is within
my sight

An egomaniac me
and
I will forever be
as long as someone
across the sea,
the Globe reads me

I will be the Poem
The Poet
for all times to be
call me by any name
you wish,
'''NARCISSISTIC '''
it's all up to thee

but only love my
Poetry
more than me!

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Are lovers humans?
"From that far off distant lands
Humans on my page land"

This verse makes me confuse.

Alid

best alidz thanks for flying by
let others reach the sky
high!

author comment

this is excellently written. The best poetry is esoteric with various depths of meaning. The imagery brings us to the surreal, a valid view from thhe subconscious mind given to many interpretations/ such poetry defies a single interpretation; therein lies the confusionasauch poetry rrveals its truth as a whole,the various verses, etc, creating the pieces of a mosaic, in which the m,essage is clear/

my tears would have washed
all my poetry
twas only your magnanimity
that lent a heart to me
to continue
which I still do only
Joe
coz only of you
so a
BIG THANK YOU

author comment

my friend, I only told of whjat I know...never doubt yourself/

I liked these lines Lovedly:-

I will be the Poem
The Poet
for all times to be

Regards,,,

raj (sublime_ocean)

Bombay sublime
Marine Drive
JUHU BEACH
OR WORSE STILL
NARIMAN POINT
WHERE MANY
lovers combine
from condoms
crabs drink
white wine
gold mine
i discovered in 1999
on a visit to place
where you now dine

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