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Spouse’s desire ....a poetic imagination

Oh lord all friends of mine
have been so relieved
when will you be so kind to me
this guy has prostate
no seeds, to lay
his mouth does stink,
I can’t sleep a wink
he farts all through the night
my nose I have to cover alright
I can’t like a kiss
he also perhaps does miss

the whole night he does snore
oh now what a bore
all these years I have ignored

now all those younger to me
have become totally free
they can go here and there
but I am stuck to this old guy
till when can you, tell me
Oh! Lord when will my desire you fill
when can you his breath now still

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Many a prayer uttered under the breath, just beware of what you ask for, lol.
The lord may smite you and let you be blamed for the demise and you will rot in jail where all the prisoners, well I will leave it at that LOL
Take care young Bard a goodly write I read here this night,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

feelings I compose
u may
destiny has its own way


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