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spiritual rv in heaven

When you go earlier,
or follow
take some snacks
biscuits and coffee
you know I like it

God’s stalls may not open
for a very long time
and
Bards you and me
will be left out of line

But yes,
let’s earmark a RV
you know what is? ‘tis!
where will it be near about
a lonesome
invisible Apple tree
may be...
A new Adam and Eve
may still be playing,
Ah LOL....
like we once did
having now
a sweeter and more jovial
Humorous
Bright, blushing, nectar loving like kid
now your bid.....

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I cant spell that French word either lol, We will meet one day even if our thoughts are the only travellers in the ether they will touch and I will know the young Bard is there, never fear the unknown, because what you don't know can never hurt..
Yours as always, Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

what a lol occasion
'twill be
u and I rolling
not knowing
who is he!

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