Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Spirit of Butterfly [Sunku]

Submitted by raj on Tue, 2018-04-24 05:19

Carefree
I flutter
tirelessly

taking
utmost joy
in living life

longing
to embrace
tranquility

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

raj

Tue, 2018-04-24 06:06

Thanks for the read and your appreciative comment. This was actually inspired by one of the recent poems submitted to stream by IRiz.

Warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

Rula

Tue, 2018-04-24 14:28

Rula's picture
Volunteer badge

all wish to have such a spirit!
Wonderful raj!!

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Please follow me on Instagram
https://instagram.com/poetry.jo?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

raj

Wed, 2018-04-25 05:06

for your read and appreciative comment. It is a poem inspired by another poem posted on stream. I wrote this not to fish for compliments but for satisfying my muse. Good appreciative comments from you and Mark shall keep me inspired and also to keep my interest in writing Sunkus alive.

Thanks again friend...

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

Geezer

Wed, 2018-04-25 15:36

Geezer's picture
Volunteer badge

the Sunku! It still surprises me when I see the little red squiggly line beneath the word Sunku!
I have been so indoctrinated in the form, that I forget that it is not yet a recognized form! You have done a fine job here!
~ Geezer,
,

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

raj

Wed, 2018-04-25 15:52

for the read and good words. Like you I too feel bad to see the wiggly red underline below Sunku since this form is yet to be accredited in the annals of poetry wh9ich would lead to its acceptance in Dictionary and I believe in the drop down Menu under Form in Neopoet..
....................................

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.