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SPEAKING IN TONGUES

Submitted by Geremia on Thu, 2016-05-12 11:26

SPEAKING IN TONGUES

whispering visions like ghosts,
float through my mind;
some stay a while
then fade away
some linger to haunt my day
and in different tongues they tell
their thoughts in foreign ways.
sounds make magic litanies
and words are the incantation.

FADO - A beautiful Portuguese Song: Lágrima - Dulce ... - YouTubeVideo for youtube fado▶ 5:29

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9HB406iGofoDec 21, 2010 - Uploaded by Frank Cole
Lágrima is my favourit song in my mother language -

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Fado, Music of Portugal - YouTube Video for fado music▶ 2:36 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFjeMZoman Jul 31, 2013 - Uploaded by Viking Cruises Born along the waterfront, the dramatic songs of Fado speak of life, struggle and passion. The genre originated ... Fado-The Soul of Portugal - YouTube
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Sparrow

Sun, 2016-05-15 04:19

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Loved this one, talking in tongues and spirits that come and go, a subject that needs care as out there are many that either can't understand or become frightened by the mere mention of them and their ways lol.
Take care young Joe great to read some of your thoughts again, Yours Ian..

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Geremia

Sun, 2016-05-15 11:54

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thank u. Ian

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