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Sometimes, at times...

Submitted by loved on Tue, 2012-08-07 12:45

sometimes when I read others grumble
I too tumble
but then I compose my off cuffy ones …
some senselessness ones
this is such a one…
still you love it
that's the whole fun
poetry makes me smile
and I help others also follow me
those who cry
I shake them up too you see
just simply follow me
I am the master of free verse
off the cuff creative poetry
humour I must all of thee
which accomplish
very few poets like me.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Wed, 2012-08-08 09:23

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for your growth of aggressive ego cancer.

But I do like this. Who could deny your ebullient heart and actually making sense in your poem?

When you write a line like
"I am the master of free verse"
You better be able to back it up by joining my upcoming workshop on free verse.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

loved

Wed, 2012-08-08 11:38

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lovely words
hope I am free for free verse
to be able to participate
at free will...

Hopefully..

But I do like this. Who could deny your ebullient heart and actually making sense in your poem?

loved

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