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some so many now say

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2015-12-08 20:07

Gratitude

What does one lose?
in being kind
just you I ought to remind

read my poetry and unwind
your mind

a newer vein of poetic flood
now you are bound to find

Some say my poetry is becoming

Shakespearean
like sublime

they must be much more kind
than anyone can conceive me
like having the Bard’s mind

He must be groaning and turning
Oh god
have you again sent me?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geremia

Tue, 2015-12-08 20:22

Geremia's picture

I hear you, my friend. You are not alone. I posted a poem in Italian A CHE PRO? I am curious to see what effort one will put into deciphering the poem. It can b e done, and my message is clear.

joe

lovedly

Tue, 2015-12-08 23:07

lovedly's picture

please post English version here
we'd love to know

Frankly speaking
if i compile my poetry
will some one buy and read it ?
frank opinion please kindly
Joe I value you
as you are a real poet QUALIFIED POET
others mostly r like me

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Geremia

Wed, 2015-12-09 00:41

Geremia's picture

you have no reason to doubt yourself.

joe

lovedly

Wed, 2015-12-09 10:29

lovedly's picture

you are the only pearl
in a lonely oyster
one would love to unfurl
you hold my
only balding curl

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alidzain

Wed, 2015-12-09 13:07

alidzain's picture

hi!
sometimes I read
but i'm lost in my mind.
other times i read
and my stress unwinds.
sometimes i disagree
but refuse to speak
because i respect thee
and refuse to bicker.
I read you whenever i can
never you mind,
my friend

Alid

lovedly

Wed, 2015-12-09 13:43

lovedly's picture

i also do u====s... no?

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