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Soliloquy for Ian

Loved or lovedly....

I have stopped posting here
having taken a sabbatical
entered another domain
where busy I remain
now breathless

Neopoet doesn't need me
I have learned a lot happily
so let me be me
and Ian all my love for thee
you are the only one who held my hand
all these three and one half years

a soliloquy for you

Oh! My friend
philosopher
and guide
stay alongside
let no colour of skin differentiate you and me
I have the same with- in

all blood is red
out with the doubts
those dwell within
I compose here only for you
and you taught me how to hold

out the damned mistrust
let’s not bust our trust
upon the wings of time
we shall fly
side by side

you will neither precede me
nor will I
we will go alongside

hope this soliloquy will do
out those shadows of doubt
from within you
will Ian you

I surely hope this will do
even for Snowman

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Thank you for this write, but always remember that it is the whole of Neopoet that holds you so.
You are loved, Lovedly, so never fear we will walk together through many a year.
That our words are written is good enough for the world.
They can have them for nothing, if they help but one person it is worth the time taken to write them.
I wonder how many we have touched over these last few years here on Neopoet.
We write some read, why do they read it is only because there is a genuine need for them to have company.
That we supply our companionship to all who reads our words matters not, it is a life choice.
Go well young Bard and keep writing,
Yours Ian.

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

We write to while

they read to,
at us smile
we love to be heard
that's our style
they have but to walk
that extra mile
so Ian
smile with me
I will also with thee
but let them all smile
along with us
but not at us
will all smile please....

So smile will ye
as does this loved
lovedly

author comment

and it is well merited indeed.
But why don't you read others' work at Neo
and tell what do you think of what they write.
I am for one who appreciate everyone's visit
just same as you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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haven't I read you?

author comment

I know you do whenever time is at your side.
Be well !

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I have just posted do visit

I have all the time
in the world
as I live
TIME passes
by me
marking time in double time

still running
life's out burning
time knows
heaven knows
but sad none on earth knows
what's the TIME

Meaning
WHEN!

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