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Solarly Creator

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2020-01-11 06:22

If any
is
Sun

it ignites and flames
and does every one
burn
then
finally
churn

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft

Comments

Dandini

Wed, 2021-01-27 12:25

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I can understand why this has been ignored for over a year.

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lovedly

Wed, 2021-01-27 13:41

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what is ur understadning

author comment

Dandini

Thu, 2021-01-28 11:36

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To be frank, it's not very good.

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lovedly

Thu, 2021-01-28 12:19

lovedly's picture

you are frank
man
but u must say why show ur ability to critique anyone can just form an opinion just one

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Dandini

Thu, 2021-01-28 17:57

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Sorry I don't understand your sentence.

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