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Snafoo (Sensitive New Age Fakes on Overdrive)

one metrosexual
and one real snag
standing on the corner
huffin’ on a fag
one says bitch
and the other says ho
blown is the cover
of the snag metro

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I can't tell if this is kind of insulting or funny. what is a snag?

sensitive new age guy

I only mean to insult those guys who spout feminist doctrine in the hope of scoring with the ladies

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thanks for clarifying. yeah i hate those guys, they give feminism a bad connotation. in that case, nice write :P


I like this it's punchy, fresh, and very effective. Keep them coming, Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

and ascertaining its meaning I explained
"No, I'm a Caring Understanding Nineties Type"
Still am.
Snagism never really worked with the ladies, it only attracted closet faghags.

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