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Smouldered

Smoulder me not yet
your smile alone envelopes
all lovers must be like you
shockingly electrifying too

ere in the lightning
in the sky
they are embellished
so love your smile
as I do all my while

but let me enjoy
my dear poets
my home on Earth
till we or our
your kind of souls meet
as per your desire
since your mind's do fire
since birth

till then within me
ignite a warm fire
as I smoulder and merge
with you wholly- entire

burn me not
in your love’s fire
let me enjoy my life
yet before I reach the pyre
your smile and love
all the more
I'd forever admire

if you also encompass me
as in love we both fire
to become ashes for ever
to commemorate
your intensely burning desire

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Poetry is NOT every ones cup of tea... So be fairly aware poetry must just come from within
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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