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Smile If You Please

Submitted by loved on Fri, 2011-01-28 18:32

Smile If You Please

People hanker for smiles
I give them for free
When you want to smile
Just remember me
And
Smiles will come to thee
From my humorous face or poetry
What ever it be
Smiles for you over there
All of you are totally free
Read me or don't
But smile for me
Will you please.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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mand

Fri, 2011-01-28 18:50

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(((( SMILE ))))) From me to you. Love your poem.

Love Mand cccccc

loved

Fri, 2011-01-28 19:08

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cheers champagne for uuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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loved

Sat, 2011-01-29 11:51

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In loneliness think of me
In the loneliness solitude of time just think of me a friend of thine upon my shoulders lay your head and weep if you wish to instead and when your tears flow dry you will then know how loneliness too does fly and a smile shall come upon your face as when a lonesome stranger like me the face you try to trace in the mirrors of time and the shadows of life when ever you are ever in strife think about me and my lonely life I rest on shoulders still alive none wants to carry me yet there where the end has yet to me finally lay to rest .

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loved

Sat, 2011-01-29 14:04

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already replied this

i was always on triond for last two years
also on wiki where u have gone now

these three sites i adore

wiki and triond pay
and i have donated all my earnings for CANCER FUNDS HOW SO EVER little

thanks have a good week end rgds frnd and sir u haven't answerd my email i sent to uy about 1944

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raj

Sat, 2011-01-29 14:51

a Smile is truly a precious gift...it reminded me of the song by the legendary Charlie Chaplin which is about Smile...

keep smiling ..

raj (sublime_ocean)

loved

Sat, 2011-01-29 15:10

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keep smiling

when u smile ............the world smiles with uuuuuu
and if uuUUUUU weep..................................... you weep alone............. AND LONGER 222222222222

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scribbler

Sat, 2011-01-29 23:17

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I'm so lazy that ever since I read that it takes fewer muscles to smile than frown I've been going around grinning like an idiot lol. Enjoyed the poem.....................scribbler

loved

Sun, 2011-01-30 08:30

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then my whole life

has been worth its while .

thanks
Shirley , 465 and Scribbler and Ian RAJ
urs true SMILER .
ME
LOVED
LHLHLH

SMILES FOR EVER ARE FREE

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loved

Mon, 2011-01-31 18:49

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shall take care in future
thanks for the smile
in any case

loved

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lovedly

Mon, 2021-12-20 12:37

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I still smiled

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