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sleepy world

How is it every time, I awake
I find the sleepy world
all my accepted friends are snoring
and when they come on line
they will not find
me active and alive
so Likes they will leave for me
to count and strive.

keep snoring gals and guys
life is so boring
sleep and death are akin
long, silent and snoring

I just woke up from slumber
to realize
death is no surmise

a deafening long eternal sleep
from which none does ever rise.
that is for real
but no surprise

for it is the birth's
Final prize...

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Well good to see that you are around when all are asleep, and that death is the final prize, not going to play this game anymore.
Can't I have a cup or something as that curtains call, do you really not want to join me in a cup of tea young Bard lol.
Quite a good write there, I will still make you a cup as I know you will in your curiosity come looking for my cave after you have closed your earthly book..
We will see, it is in the now, where all things are intertwined, so there's no hurry it is always "Now"
Yours as always, Ian.T
PS:- miss your comments on the few pieces I write I shall remove the last one tomorrow as it has been here long enough lol..

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

but your cup will be
with no milk

less sugar maybe

diabetes you know is not good ask sadie
by the way
what lane is your cave
i have passed by so many
come bring your cup to me
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Just ask for Sadie and then ask where Granddad is, it will be explained to you there is much to learn yet and it is all so interesting.
There is no sickness there and you can think things like a cup of tea or anything it will be as you think but the think will be like an massive computer once you get use to using it things slowly get put in the right perspective, there is no want and no need, Oh well you will one day learn of these things in the great Now.
Take care young Bard, you will even be able to talk to the Great Bard one now,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..


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