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Skimpy
Skimpy.
Hello skimpy
happy swift glide
on our ladies pattern path.
entrenched are you
in their costume Constitution.
You delete differences
between the thighs and the legs
all is on for deliberate display.
You pacify the crying shoulder
who weeps for being cowardly covered.
You help the air view
the sacred cage
where the abdomen nests.
skip closer skimpy
view your pictures of our little ladies
A divinely blessed one
wishes to show it's lot, opens its barn
laying its barn at bandit feet.
I blame not your pictures
but thy models; Our little ladies.
Written by Idowu Daniel
(Profdee)
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