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To Sir Esker with Love....

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2013-11-10 15:05

You belong to Ontario as per you
The West is quite open... anyone can hit anyone.....a wrong doer on ones head ...rightly or wrongly ... it's well said
But as a kid we all do ....so many tricks ...smack ...shack and in bushes we till ----- gals and guys alike we spill..............
Should it debar our will ....as we become Seniors and Mature...
The Eastern part of the world is not as openly bravely outspoken ...as USA /CANADA
but believe you me politics is like ticks ---------------it bites all and any one ....and any where ...what to say of USA Canada or Australia...
Do take care we love to read you Sir Esker......

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Mon, 2013-11-11 19:08

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Not really a poem this time, so there is not much to say.
Now come on badness you are capable of writing grand pieces and I am waiting for the next one..
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Mon, 2013-11-11 20:29

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I shall remove it

loved

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Ian.T

Tue, 2013-11-12 03:38

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That which is written should not be removed, it has become a part of the whole.
Let us wait to see if others learn or glean anything from your write.
Sir Esker has already replied in his true form..
Take care young Bard, have patience,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Esker

Tue, 2013-11-12 01:04

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carriage wheels before the cannons and artillery
civility read aloud from the press
when it was still fermented and brewed
and pressed like our coffee house brew
which shall still be denizens of
desire

the pauper and the plans...

Seren

Tue, 2013-11-12 08:12

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Not really poetry as Ian says but a message in word none the less, I look forward to your next poetic write you have a flare for words when you choose to ;)

love JC x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

loved

Tue, 2013-11-12 12:07

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I agree
but awaiting ur two edits
shall remove this
as even Esker didn't like it
so it appears ...

he is too much in a world
unknown of his own

loved

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Esker

Wed, 2013-11-13 15:12

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Loved...I didnt come out and say I never disliked this..
on the contrary I like it a lot...
because it ventures into creativity
Unlike myself that just runs the same
route over and over with the formulae
of what I know.....

but maybe I should have been
more supportive
I do tend to be off in my own
world....

maybe I'm missing so much...

loved

Wed, 2013-11-13 16:09

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no two humans can ever be alike
no two poets should ever be alike

else creativity will go to dogs
and poets to their gods

you maintain your uniqueness
so shall I
in opposite directions
we may fly

but to read my poetry do try
I always do yours
so let spilled milk be no cause.

loved

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Esker

Thu, 2013-11-14 14:49

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I enjoy your writing style
and should read and comment more
Give you feedback on your work
as it is a Work environment
and silence is silence

Thank You! for your comments
and support!
It means a lot to me

Mr Esker!~

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