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Singular

Submitted by lou on Sat, 2010-11-20 05:35

I
Singular, alone.
A transient being ,
wandering the earth.

Connecting with some
disconnecting with others.
Assimilation of recollections.

Fated as a race to enter and exit, solo.
meanwhile waiting for the other half
of the equation..

The purpose of life is to
Forge the eternal connection.
Spiralling out only to return,
shelter from the cold.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 13:15

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Thanks Shirl,

love lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 13:17

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Thank you that's high praise.

lou xx

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Kailashana2

Sat, 2010-11-20 08:32

Lou!

I can only follow Seren's cue.

A Bow.

~

lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 13:19

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Thanks , that is very kind of you .

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Psyve

Sat, 2010-11-20 11:59

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Very beautifully expressed:

"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."

A sentiment I agree with.

Psyve

Psyve

Sat, 2010-11-20 11:59

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Very beautifully expressed:

"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."

A sentiment I agree with.

Psyve

lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 13:21

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Thank you . im still looking .

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 13:22

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Thank you

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2010-11-20 14:09

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I can totally relate to this poem. I love the style in which it is written. Your words just reach in a grab me.

love, cat

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lou

Sat, 2010-11-20 17:27

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Thanks I'm glad you liked it

Lou xx

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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magics02

Sun, 2010-11-21 19:07

I see in this one a great thinking verse and see your poetry is coming along great here. Miss chatting with you but I have been working alot on alot of projects so time is varied and I am happy to stop in here and read this tonite. great job Lou and hope your feeling fine:)

Love Mona
xoxoxo

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