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A Simple Read

While folding the pages
of the life's book
page after page
in search of happiness
between the lines,
a period or a comma
might hinder the journey,
don't stop though,
the book's still open
your epitaph isn't written yet.

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A simple philosophy very aptly expressed / explained by you in this crisp gem of a poem .....a great reflection...

warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

that was so quick. So happy to know it appeals to you dear friend.
Really appreciate it.
Thank you!

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Not me Rula...i need to thank you for giving me the pleasure of a read...I believe this has a potential of converting into Sunku form because with such simplicity and in few words your message in the poem hits home....
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raj (sublime_ocean)

wish to have your sunku virsion and share it here with me dear raj.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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