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SILVER LININGS

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2015-09-18 12:46

SILVER LININGS

Silver-lined clouds and rainbow rains
buttercup fields in West Virginia
days when my heart felt another
safely sleeping in the womb
the sudden death of being born
and the sudden birth that death brings

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lovedly

Fri, 2015-09-18 22:53

lovedly's picture

you give a fresh version
Joe

Geremia

Sat, 2015-09-19 08:30

Geremia's picture

thanks :)

joe

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