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silken pyjamas

Pyjamas
or not
silky are hot
some like to silhouettes
show off

All like to show
the sides
the woods
the forests too
without pyjamas
would you like
also too

The smell of skin
the hollowness
of rattling bones
we love to hear
deaf may one be
but would you too.
without pyjamas

yes these softy things
all see
speak for the desire in you
wear no pyjamas
will you try to...

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
inspired for the first time reading a reference to pyjamas
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Sunrise before I do
Today after a long time
I arose before the sunrise...
Unless I am tired
ere the night
I get up before sunlight

Dawn is my morn
then when the sun comes up
I go back to sleep
now I know I am in safe hands
still alive
let the sun continue to rise

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the one has also skipped it
over two months no one read it
down with the pyjamas
now will be the
final show

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