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Silent Thoughts Recall

Congratulations
for the seriously silent poem
ever written
He'd love your devotion

I silently share your loneliness
and hope
you will have your balance life
one of silent calmness

Eternity is too far to see
let him in your heart
forever live
still
Silently

He will speak with thee daily
your silence will vanish
like a summer's breeze
as your voice in smiles
shall freeze

now kindly read
Silently please

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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to let you know, that I love the line " Eternity is too far to see". ~ Gee.
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many liked it

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thnx again Gee
many can't yet see
my imagery

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