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Silent Synergy:
Mindful empathy
Extraneous apathy
Comes telepathy
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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weirdelf
Sat, 2018-04-21 17:25
Nup
Mindless empathy
Extraneous apathy
Chance telepathy
cheers,
Jess
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OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2018-04-21 21:27
Weirdelf
Got to hand this one to you - I preferred your version.
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