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Silent Melody

My heart strings
play soft music today
in this, the lost world

I’ve every hope
someone will notice me
eventually

Looking up
from my daydream I see
sheets of blue with
white clouds underneath
puffed out like cotton candy

With the sound of
playful birds chirping

Maybe that’s why nobody can hear me?

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Thank you, I'm not feeling clever at the moment. lol but thanks for being so kind.

Thank you...Teddy

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you have captured in your poem. Don't we All want to be noticed?

what a pleasant suprise, i'm glad my desperation has come across. Thank you my dearest Stan.

Thank you...Teddy

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we were flying above the clouds and could see no folks below only cotton sheets banning our voices deaf me ah all were the aircrafts sounds were drowning who the damned one would hear a falling what ec=ver no one in any case does us hear

I guess we all feel like this at some time, me its now. Thank you my dear Lovedley

Thank you...Teddy

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