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Silent Love

At times remaining silent
conveys
all about a million miles

he also must be missing
smile at him
he'd be also needing

love does not come easily
oh dear lovely beauty

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Making up with a lost Ex
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Short but saying so much!! I really love this one. I offer nothing but praise on a excellent write.

Much Love & a big hug J x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

pick up a poetic sledge hammer
and let me know
how brains can also blow

author comment

Hmmm I'll write a poem for you :)

That should blow your socks off at least lol

Hugs xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

I won't sleep tonight
am anxious Seren
you too decided in favor of
lovedly

author comment

I just posted a poem about my Dad. I can't post till tomorrow at the earliest. I will start on it when I wake up.

Hugs xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Seren good night

author comment

The sun's peeking out now. Time I went to bed. I am going to spend my Saturday afternoon reading and commenting on poems.

Much love J xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

you've come after years missed a few good ones
alas!

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