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SILENCE.... THE ANGELS OF PEACE ARE PASSING BY

SILENCE.... THE ANGELS OF PEACE ARE PASSING BY
AMEN ..

Peace comes from within

Peace comes from within
seeing the surfs
rise and fall

a distant ship
far in the horizon
rises tall
then calms your
DOWN UNDER
nerves
waves bring calm and peace

not writing on the sand at all
twill be washed
ere you into the waters fall

calm down
peace comes from within
let’s now begin

Searching peace
from within!

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Free verse
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Comments

There are people who undergo hell yet are a peace and there are others whose lives are golden who can't seem to find contentment. Thus the finding of peace IS an inner thing, not something which can be imposed by another. Liked your poem.........stan

Stan ur power of words
strengthens my inners
guts

author comment

Strangely a good write and a hard theme to put across, this you did well.
It would be nice if it was pointed at someone or something, you mentioned the Aussies but nothing to nail it down maybe it needs finishing.
Take care and know we are there,
Yours Ian..

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