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Silence is all pervading
in the minds of deserted resorts
of the inner synapses
of distraught minds

then we assure
of a newer volition
of a novella kind of pieces within
peace without

this nuance of life
none can understand
no doubt what effuses
from the heart
of restless minds
solitary solace of a kind
that none else can find

except isolated
determined minds
wait this is all about
what happens in silence

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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A look within but with clouded ways nearly a grand piece..
I was thrown by the word "volition" it stopped me.
Looked it up and it was some heavy Rock so I dropped it,
Then I tried to roll it up a hill and just at the top I ran out of thoughts
so had to start again lol
Otherwise you seem to be on form again,
Take care as you can see I am keeping an eye on you lol,
Yours as always Ian ..

Words can build a nation

Ian ensure
very few read here so
i gallop off

as you said
by own volition
no limitation

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for u googled Ian

author comment

Many thanks I failed to read all the descriptions of the word so you are correct.
I shall go and sit in the corner .. lol
Take care old sage only because you is older than me lol Yours Ian T He, He

Words can build a nation

but each time one comments
we have to thank em
so 10 advance thanks

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