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A SIGHT TO BEHOLD

I was made
For war.
She let her
Sugar pour.

She was made
For peace.
I fought with
The police.

I have a head
Full of bad ideas.
She is making home
Made tortillas.

I'm a work
In project.
She is a
Desired object.

I have too
Much to say.
She is a
Quiet day.

I easily
Fall apart.
She is smooth,
State of the art.

I’m full of
Nervous energy.
She’s a special
Documentary.

I’m that,
Four AM call.
She is the
First snowfall.

I’m full of
Confrontation.
She is a solid
Foundation.

I’m ready
To attack.
She’s easy going
And relaxed.

I can make
A scene.
She is a
Living dream.

I’m a fucking
Mess.
She is hot
Off the press.

I seem to
Know it all.
She is that
One free call.

I’m a big
Ball of worry.
She is never
In a hurry.

There is something
Wrong with me.
She is perfect
As can be.

I run hot
Then cold.
She is a
Sight to behold.

Turbo1904♥

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Structured: Western
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Comments

your poem is a rhyming list of comparisons and differences. you are two, yet together you are whole. very well done!

*hugs, Cat

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Hello, nice to meet you. Thank you for the comment on A SIGHT TO BEHOLD. We are no longer together. Ten years, it was magic for me anyway. Thank you again...

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this is perfect! My only criticism is the use of your capitals. ~ Geezer.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

I'm sure this is two separate people (opposites attract, sometimes) but this works on the bi-polar level.

I've heard the term janus-faced which I believe is someone with two-sides.

Whatever it is called, I enjoyed the contrast between two.

Well crafted & delivered.

regards

One

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"with all that I am & all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me"

Thank you for your comment. Bi-polar sounds about right to me. Constant opposition can never work out. But it was fun trying anyways. Thanks again....

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