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Should you forget me REFORCED EDIT
Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
In search of a fresher one
than me
never mind just forget me
I shall chase another speedier wind would you care to join in the flood too
never mind we shall sing the chorus too
I and you
sorry
you and I
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Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Triskelion
Sun, 2022-01-02 16:49
I'd like to see..
..another stanza ending with
"Where you are"
The wind is one of a true poet's muses. It is also my favourite way to travel.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Mon, 2022-01-03 17:15
cdn poet friend
just add on i will include not much of a musician i am
author commentTriskelion
Mon, 2022-01-03 17:56
Okay
I apologize.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Mon, 2022-01-03 17:59
Thomas who
see edit as requested
author commentlovedly
Sun, 2022-01-02 17:17
ok
tomorrow I will
today's one free poem
is over
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author commentJackweb
Mon, 2022-01-03 06:34
This is enjambment
The poem has no interruptions of any punctuation mark. As I read aloud the tone in the poem drops unfinished lines. In the poem there is rhetorical question aboud. In many cases it may be intended to start a discourse, or as a means of displaying or emphasize the speaker's opinion on topic.
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb