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She came just to teach me
how to enter
the domain of poetry

then as my seeds took roots
she vanished into thin air

she loved not me
but my cadence ah essence
soothing to her wounded heart
the guy who said
loved her
did he finally secretly depart

Then one day multi storms came
like harbingers of another tsunami
she went away along with the waves
but left no smell of any slightest of trails

since long gone beyond
the foreseeable yonder
she has gone
taken my love along

she still lives in my memory
who can of her soul
within my soul
relate a story

she came just to go away
life has its own unique pass-away
where those whom you love and want to stay
just come to simply silently sheepishly go astray

how can I not wonder
in the machinations of mind
you call him Almighty
whom I am unable to find

She came to go
just to leave me blind

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Well, well, a great piece of writing and I enjoyed your loss,
mind you I hope it was fiction lol.
One siren among 3.5 billion you are having tunnel vision, not blindness,
Yours as always Ian ..

Words can build a nation

ha ha
lol Ians

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