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SHE CYNOSURE OF ALL EYES

She was a real beauty
from Faroe Islands
North Atlantic
but very lonely

She showed all the beauty
of her place
swam in the nude
wow wow wow
my mouth opened wide
she did not smile
id not hide
but glued her eyes

Then she vanished into the sea
jumped from such a high level
my heart sank

I never got to see more
neither of her
nor the Island
she vanished simply banished
into the sea so blue
I wish I could see her once more
but sadly no more

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A fair femme from the Faroes. I learned a new word. Thanks!

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

ISLANDS IN NORTH ANTARTICA
THANKS for reading

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about four days sailing off of Scotland if the wind is right, often referred to as the Faroes.

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

thank you poet friend of neo

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