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Seven Deadly Sins (Greed)

Submitted by Teddy15 on Sun, 2020-10-04 04:31

My behavior
helps manipulate the weak
Trickery is my foreplay
material things I hoard with pleasure
The thought of someone
having more than I
just leaves me with an aching
to take at no cost
I’m blinded by obsession
Constantly wishing for more
alas in pursuit of wealth and mere objects
I am left poor.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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So, my new project is the Seven Deadly Sins, I shall post each (Sin) day by day. Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride. Then i shall join them together to make a full Poem.
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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Teddy15

Sun, 2020-10-04 08:52

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Happy birthday!
I'm afraid in my most greediest moment have eaten your entire birthday cake! lol.

So I only have pride left to write and post. That's easy. Thanks so much for coming by today and have a very wonderful day.

Thank you...Teddy

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Teddy15

Sun, 2020-10-04 09:25

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Yes you know me well. Have a fun day Sir.

Thank you...Teddy

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Geezer

Sun, 2020-10-04 13:43

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Greed! I want more! This is great and I want more! LoL
Can't wait for the rest and for you to make it all fit together.
I guess I fit the definition of greed here, I'm anxious to see how it all comes out. ~ Geez.
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Teddy15

Sun, 2020-10-04 13:54

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Oh my, lol greedy
I do hope it doesn't dissapoint, we will see very soon. Thanks for your encouragement always

Thank you...Teddy

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