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Seven Deadly Sins (Greed)

My behavior
helps manipulate the weak
Trickery is my foreplay
material things I hoard with pleasure
The thought of someone
having more than I
just leaves me with an aching
to take at no cost
I’m blinded by obsession
Constantly wishing for more
alas in pursuit of wealth and mere objects
I am left poor.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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So, my new project is the Seven Deadly Sins, I shall post each (Sin) day by day. Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride. Then i shall join them together to make a full Poem.
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well, you have successfully covered all the by you perceived character flaws (of yourself) although I would take issue with you on most. No one is perfect; we all have our flaws, but I'm sure, you fall into the average class of kindhearted human beings. And now I'll see how you might put it all together. Great job, dear Contessa.
Jerry

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Happy birthday!
I'm afraid in my most greediest moment have eaten your entire birthday cake! lol.

So I only have pride left to write and post. That's easy. Thanks so much for coming by today and have a very wonderful day.

Thank you...Teddy

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I forgot!! Yes, we have to cover "Pride!" No sweat, dear. I have never met anyone more devoid of false or genuine pride than you, lol. Kidding, Sweets. Our best friends, Jack and Jean will take us out for dinner and cake. Some restaurants are open again, but no English Muffins are allowed; sorry, Muffin Teddy. Well. dear, you too have a great day, ye hear? Bye for now. Jerry

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Yes you know me well. Have a fun day Sir.

Thank you...Teddy

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Greed! I want more! This is great and I want more! LoL
Can't wait for the rest and for you to make it all fit together.
I guess I fit the definition of greed here, I'm anxious to see how it all comes out. ~ Geez.
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Oh my, lol greedy
I do hope it doesn't dissapoint, we will see very soon. Thanks for your encouragement always

Thank you...Teddy

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