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Seven Deadly Sins (Envy)

Jealousy so powerful
Resenting all that my neighbours have
My desire to see them deprived
So painful to watch others enjoy life
I will gladly sew my eyes shut with a thread and needle
If I could dance with the green eyed monster
But even without eyes
I couldn’t promise not to envy him.

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So, my new project is the Seven Deadly Sins, I shall post each (Sin) day by day. Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride. Then i shall join them together to make a full Poem.
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Well I have to say, you are my champion on this project, I so appreciate your thoughts and your help on wrath that was quite a hard one. Hope all is well Sir in the USA XOX

Thank you...Teddy

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