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Damn it there was a glitch the server was down
Out of my room each day with a savage frown
Will normality ever be returned?
Do I have to search for a new place?

There my words to churn
Or will it be joy of joys that sets me free
When the Neopoet site returns to me
I checked in the evening gone
There it was singing my song

Of friends from across the world
Poetry and words still spilled
I slept well last night no more fright
That the day will wake to nothing.

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I cried a tear as you were not there, Lovely to see you all back, The word Bitch is just a word no gender abuse intended. Yours Ian.T
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Ian...I was a bit disgruntled as well...glad to see everything back up and running

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

An ode to temporary death lol.............stan

I am writing through tears as I never thought I would read here again,
Bless you all I is as happy as a pig in shit.
Take care young man, must get on, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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It seems almost a skeleton.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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You should buy a new car that will take you far.
With a beech trim on the dash and lovely leather to so brash
Not to worry though that there will be someone to tow you home
Should you from the beaten tracks roam.
Thanks for your visit but can't understand why on Earth you would buy a car from the Elf, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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A weird dashboard this morning. Seems ok now.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

Ian, I too was soooo happy to see the page back up again Paul posted that it was back on the Neopoet page on FB I am not sure if your a member I will add everyone tomorrow that I can find :)

great poem I thoroughly enjoyed it hun

Wesley, My Neopoet page on my phone has a skeletal look but the one on my computer(now) is perfect,

love always JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

i love the way you put it into words! you reminded me to be grateful that the site is running instead of whining and complaining.:)

Alid

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