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Sparkling wine;
ruby red fine.
The sunsets, two silhouettes,
moving into the power of love.

No pretenses
waking senses.
Desire, boom on fire,
sinking into the light of your eyes.

Sensual clicks,
exhaling mix.
Body flow, let myself go,
melting into the texture of you.

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for a lovely orgasmic intercourse
but of course
clothed in wild thoughts


It's all in the imagination!

He he

Thanks for coming by to read, drool and comment. Lol

Love Mand xxxxxx

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Pant, pant.........will return after a cold shower lol...........stan

to enjoy the cool of a fellow poet's imagination

a poetry is one which germinates
into different directions..
this time of thoughts
not fascinations


Watch out Susan!

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I guess the girls in Wales are hot now that Digit has been there lol.
Jogged my memory about forest fires and barbies can't remember why, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

You'll have to send Digit here again! Lol - trouble is they'll be hot ( possibly charred ) for a different reason. Lol

He he

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