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sense of achievement

Good bathe in the
seas
and
you must continue to live
with your illusions

let others think for you
and

out of you make a celebrity
which one day you will be
only if you
in their footsteps continue

conserve your brain
since you have achieved
Spiritual celebrity..

so will ye preserve
your own brains
in a museum
only let them think
for thee
hey celebrity......

later half
ME CELEBRITY

Some are lucky
when they are picked up
groomed nursed into a celebrity
we all want to be...
not knowing the life of isolation...
which becomes ones undoing
ask any modern celebrity...
How people squeeze....

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Comments

Quite a thing of many fancy! Spiritual celebrity? How could it be connected with the formalinized brain in a pyrex glass jar fully filled with 40% formalin? Yes, it makes sense as we live in our own illusion. For me, I am just an ET, a cosmic celebrity with a gravity of galaxy. I enjoy it. LNSL (laughing not so loud).

xxxxx

yes LLSL Laugh loud so LOUD

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their EGOS
NO?

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you sum it up well

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